Sally entered the dark hallway. SLAM! All was pitch black,she tumbled on
something, instantly she knew what it was - Mum! Slowly a tear trickled down her
face. Then hollow footsteps started thundering in,
"Dad stop, please stop!" Shouted Sally but there was nothing of her kind,caring dad left. Just a hollowed out costume. What was really there was so terrible it could crush
planets into dust. Sally's dad was just a toy for this thing. Sally knew she couldn't escape but she'd fight for the small future of her life. She would die proud at least, fighting was simple for it though. He would talk to you. Make you feel you should die. Talk about betrayal and loss and hardship. Sally had had so much of this she was an easy target. Then slowly she raised her sword as did the thing,
"Why live," it muttered, "all those who doubted you? So many people have left you.So many people you trusted..." Suddenly Sally stuck her sword forwards only just being hit by it's sword.Then Sally froze, this was her father how could she hurt him?
Then with a horrible squelch it pushed the sword straight in her stomach when a sword hit him in the back,
"How dare you kill my daughter!" Shouted Fiona Blacks. Then she too took her final breath.
Well Done Grace!
"Dad stop, please stop!" Shouted Sally but there was nothing of her kind,caring dad left. Just a hollowed out costume. What was really there was so terrible it could crush
planets into dust. Sally's dad was just a toy for this thing. Sally knew she couldn't escape but she'd fight for the small future of her life. She would die proud at least, fighting was simple for it though. He would talk to you. Make you feel you should die. Talk about betrayal and loss and hardship. Sally had had so much of this she was an easy target. Then slowly she raised her sword as did the thing,
"Why live," it muttered, "all those who doubted you? So many people have left you.So many people you trusted..." Suddenly Sally stuck her sword forwards only just being hit by it's sword.Then Sally froze, this was her father how could she hurt him?
Then with a horrible squelch it pushed the sword straight in her stomach when a sword hit him in the back,
"How dare you kill my daughter!" Shouted Fiona Blacks. Then she too took her final breath.
Well Done Grace!
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